Thousands of years ago, when we first met, when gods and goddesses laughed and roamed fields of giant clover to the monotonous throb of primeval honeybees, we sat by a secret pond at night. The stars were the same then as they are now, but the constellations were different. You dipped your hand in the water as if to study an undersea plant or fish, and I dove in to do something but then I couldn’t remember what. And when I came up, the constellations had changed into Virgo and Scorpio and big and little dippers. The old cosmos was gone. That quickly a new age had begun, a human age of quiet hunger and missed connections. Dark and silent, we retreated into the ferns and mosses and heavy branches, the moon more lovely and distant than ever, and I felt your hand still wet with the possibilities of that lost moment.
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Oh, my, Gary. This is really rich and plush and thought-provoking and poignant.
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Thanks, Annie. I am going to save that cluster of adjectives for those moments when my confidence as a writer falters 🙂
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OMG….. What beautiful words. One of your finest.
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Gracias, Charlie A. Much appreciated. Every writer is never sure till they get a few “amens” 🙂
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Thanks, Annie and Charlie. That’s one page from the linked chapbook, “Year of the Butterfly,” in case you want more 🙂
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Sold to the gushing woman in the front row!
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Hahaha. Thanks, Annie. I don’t feel too pushy ’cause it’s so damned cheap 🙂
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I look forward to reading it.
Coincidentally, I mention the cosmos in my most recent post, a poem I wrote decades ago. It’s supposed to be fun, but it’s closer to doggerel than to your elegant passage.
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Beautiful!
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Gracias, Maylynno!
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Beautiful writing 😍
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Thanks, Mona!
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Lovely vignette. 🙂
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Gracias, amigo!
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beautiful writing, but then you are a published author 🙂
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Thanks, ESP! Even published authors need an “amen” once in a while (’cause it ain’t always beautiful). Gary
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