I tried to do a voice recording of my latest poem. It was tricky getting it up on WordPress, as it seems I had to make it a video, upload it to YouTube, then post the YouTube link. Let’s see how it came out. Text below.
Hero and Leander (the lamp and the water)
I still walk to that lake, the surface now still,
absence of geometry, ache of tranquility,
a voice but a whisper
soothing, sad, a silver
thorn in the side of love.
What love creates, need destroys.
We put flowers on the table
at the changing of the season.
Then the rains came. We watched
through the kitchen window.
You turned out the lamp.
“I love you more than I need you,” I said.
“Now I know what that means.”
But need, the ache, the silver thorn,
will have its bloody day.
Time passes. Seasons change.
When I walk to the lake I stir the surface,
the glitter of sun, a dangerous swell,
my hand beginning to move
into place a geometry
of memories.
With clear-sightedness, you have given form to the formless.
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Thanks, Michael! Gary
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our excellent Caballero from that great southernmost Crescent City : New Orleans.
good to hear that southern voice !
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Good to see you here, don Marcos. A melodious sample of your own voice, from the high desert of central Mexico back to the Crescent City, would be nice about right now.
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You should be doing this professionally?
Soothing, natural, and just perfect!
I love to listen to poetry but either I find really dramatized ones or too flat. yous is perfect!
would love to listen to more of your poetry!
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Wow, what a nice comment thanks, Stoner. It’s comments like that that inspire me to do more. But I just flew USA to Tokyo for a new job and will be extremely busy for a while. I won’t forget though 🙂
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Best of luck for the new job 🙂
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Reblogged this on Stoner on a rollercoaster and commented:
Poetry lovers, you are going to love this!
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Wonderful…your voice is clear and you read beautifully! ❤
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Thanks, Carol Anne!
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This is a moving poem, and your reading of it has the quiet intensity that I think strikes an excellent tone for good poetry. An eloquent earnestness is audible in your rendering.
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Thanks, JMN. That makes me feel good 🙂
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