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Two Haiku

Posted on October 10, 2014 by Daedalus Lex

/song on a quiet night/

our nights, white moth wings,
sweet sad dreams of siren flame
light on each launch borne

/crime in a meadow/

bees drone the clover
fat lemons fall everywhere
she pulls back her hair

5 thoughts on “Two Haiku”

Manja on October 11, 2014 at 6:33 am said:

Yes! A gorgeous “watercolour wordbook” once again! 🙂 I LOVE the visual bite of the “Crime in a Meadow” line.

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- Daedalus Lex on October 11, 2014 at 7:23 pm said:
  
  dank je wel, manja!
  
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  - Manja on October 12, 2014 at 7:39 pm said:
    
    Graag gedaan! 😀
    
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Fan of Dickens on October 13, 2014 at 10:51 am said:

“Sweet sad dreams of siren flame” is perfection! .

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- Daedalus Lex on October 13, 2014 at 3:57 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Fan of Dickens. But for feedback like yours, it’s hard to know which snippets are connecting with readers.
  
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