From Wroclaw, Poland, 04/24/22
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Any comments on which of the three versions of the haiku-ish poem below you think best?
1
sun and sea
a bucket of starfish
your beauty
moonlight and ash
2
sand and sea
a bucket of starfish
smooth in the sun
your beauty
moonlight and ash
3
sand and sea
a bucket of starfish
smooth in the sun
your beauty
moonlight surf
a cup of ash
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